¹tn The disjunctive clause signals the beginning of a new episode in the story.

²sn On the cultural background of the story of Sarai’s childlessness see J. Van Seters, “The Problem of Childlessness in Near Eastern Law and the Patriarchs of Israel,” JBL 87 (1968): 401-408.

³tn The Hebrew term hj*p=v! (v!pj*h), translated “servant” here (and in vv. 2, 3, 5, 6, and 8), refers to a menial female servant.

⁴sn The passage records the birth of Ishmael to Abram through an Egyptian woman. The story illustrates the limits of Abram’s faith as he tries to obtain a son through social custom. The barrenness of Sarai poses a challenge to Abram’s faith, just as the famine did in chap. 12. As in chap. 12, an Egyptian figures prominently. (Perhaps Hagar was obtained as a slave during Abram’s stay in Egypt.)

⁵tn Heb “look.” The particle hN}h! (h!N@h) introduces the foundational clause for the imperative to follow.

⁶tn Heb “enter to.” The expression is a euphemism for sexual relations (also in v. 4).

sn The Hebrew expression translated have sexual relations with does not convey the intimacy of other expressions, such as “so and so knew his wife.” Sarai simply sees this as the social custom of having a child through a surrogate. For further discussion see C. F. Fensham, “The Son of a Handmaid in Northwest Semitic,” VT 19 (1969): 312-21.

⁷tn Heb “perhaps I will be built from her.” Sarai hopes to have a family established through this surrogate mother.

⁸tn Heb “listened to the voice of,” which is an idiom meaning “obeyed.”

sn Abram did what Sarai told him. This expression was first used in Gen 3:17 of Adam’s obeying his wife. In both cases the text highlights weak faith and how it jeopardized the plan of God.

⁹tn Heb “at the end of ten years, to live, Abram.” The prepositional phrase introduces the temporal clause, the infinitive construct serves as the verb, and the name “Abram” is the subject.

¹⁰tn Heb “the Egyptian, her female servant.”

¹¹sn To be his wife. Hagar became a slave wife, not on equal standing with Sarai. However, if Hagar produced the heir, she would be the primary wife in the eyes of society. When this eventually happened, Hagar become insolent, prompting Sarai’s anger.

¹²tn Heb “entered to.” See the note on the same expression in v. 2.

¹³tn Or “she conceived” (also in v. 5)

¹⁴tn Heb “and she saw that she was pregnant and her mistress was despised in her eyes.” The Hebrew verb llq (q*l*l) means “to despise; to treat lightly; to treat with contempt.” In Hagar’s opinion Sarai had been demoted.

¹⁵tn Heb “my wrong is because of you.”

¹⁶tn Heb “I placed my female servant in your bosom.”

¹⁷tn Heb “saw.”

¹⁸tn Heb “I was despised in her eyes.” The passive verb has been translated as active for stylistic reasons. Sarai was made to feel supplanted and worthless by Hagar the servant girl.

¹⁹tn Heb “me and you.”

sn May the Lord judge between you and me. Sarai blamed Abram for Hagar’s attitude, not the pregnancy. Here she expects to be vindicated by the Lord who will prove Abram responsible. A colloquial rendering might be, “God will get you for this.” It may mean that she thought Abram had encouraged the servant girl in her elevated status.

²⁰tn The clause is introduced with the particle hN}h! (h!N@h), introducing a foundational clause for the coming imperative: “since…do.”

²¹tn Heb “in your hand.”

²²tn Heb “what is good in your eyes.”

²³tn Heb “her”; the referent (Hagar) has been specified in the translation for clarity.

²⁴tn In the Piel stem the verb hnu (u*n`h) means “to afflict; to oppress; to treat harshly; to mistreat.”

²⁵tn Heb “and she fled from her presence.” The referent of “her” (Sarai) has been specified in the translation for clarity.

²⁶tn Heb “the messenger of the Lord.” Some identify the angel of the Lord as the preincarnate Christ because in some texts the angel is identified with the Lord himself. However, it is more likely that the angel merely represents the Lord; he can speak for the Lord because he is sent with the Lord’s full authority. In some cases the angel is clearly distinct from the Lord (see Judg 6:11-23). It is not certain if the same angel is always in view. Though the proper name following the noun “angel” makes the construction definite, this may simply indicate that a definite angel sent from the Lord is referred to in any given context. It need not be the same angel on every occasion. Note the analogous expression “the servant of the Lord,” which refers to various individuals in the OT (see BDB 714).

²⁷tn Heb “And the angel of the Lord found her near the spring of water in the desert, near the spring on the way to Shur.”

²⁸tn Heb “from the presence of.”

²⁹tn The imperative yN]u^t=h!w+ (w+h!t=u^N!) is the Hitpael of hnu (u*n`h), the same word used for Sarai’s harsh treatment of her. Hagar is instructed not only to submit to Sarai’s authority, but to whatever mistreatment that involves. God calls for Hagar to humble herself.

³⁰tn Heb “The Lord’s angel said, ‘I will greatly multiply your descendants….” The order of the clauses has been rearranged in the translation for stylistic reasons.

³¹tn Heb “cannot be numbered because of abundance.”

³²tn The particle hN}h! (h!N@h) focuses on her immediate situation: “Here you are pregnant.”

³³tn The active participle refers here to something that is about to happen.

³⁴sn The name Ishmael consists of the imperfect or jussive form of the Hebrew verb with the theophoric element added as the subject. It means “God hears” or “may God hear.”

³⁵tn Heb “affliction,” which must refer here to Hagar’s painful groans of anguish.

sn This clause gives the explanation of the name Ishmael, using a wordplay. Ishmael’s name will be a reminder that “God hears” Hagar’s painful cries.

³⁶sn A wild donkey of a man. The prophecy is not an insult. The wild donkey lived a solitary existence in the desert away from society. Ishmael would be free-roaming, strong, and like a bedouin; he would enjoy the freedom his mother sought.

³⁷tn Heb “His hand will be against everyone.” The “hand” by metonymy represents strength. His free-roaming life style would put him in conflict with those who follow social conventions. There would not be open warfare, only friction because of his antagonism to their way of life.

³⁸tn Heb “And the hand of everyone will be against him.”

³⁹tn Heb “opposite, across from.” Ishmael would live on the edge of society (cf. NASB “to the east of”). Some take this as an idiom meaning “be at odds with” (cf. NRSV, NLT) or “live in hostility toward” (cf. NIV).

⁴⁰tn Heb “God of my seeing.” The pronominal suffix may be understood either as objective (“who sees me,” as in the translation) or subjective (“whom I see”).

⁴¹tn Heb “after one who sees me.”

sn For a discussion of Hagar’s exclamation, see T. Booij, “Hagar’s Words in Genesis 16:13b,” VT 30 (1980): 1-7.

⁴²tn The verb does not have an expressed subject and so is rendered as passive in the translation.

⁴³sn The Hebrew name Beer Lahai Roi (ya!r) yj^l^ ra@B=, B=a@r l^j^y r{a!) means “The well of the Living One who sees me.” The text suggests that God takes up the cause of those who are oppressed.

⁴⁴tn Heb “look.” The words “it is located” are supplied in the translation for stylistic reasons.

⁴⁵tn Heb “and Abram called the name of his son whom Hagar bore, Ishmael.”

sn Whom Abram named Ishmael. Hagar must have informed Abram of what the angel had told her. See the note on the name “Ishmael” in 16:11.

⁴⁶tn The disjunctive clause gives information that is parenthetical to the narrative.

⁴⁷tn Heb “the son of eighty-six years.”

⁴⁸tn The Hebrew text adds, “for Abram.” This has not been included in the translation for stylistic reasons; it is somewhat redundant given the three occurrences of Abram’s name in this and the previous verse.